The blue/black of ink is much clearer than the slate of mind. Trying to get hold of that clarity.
ਕਾਗ਼ਜ਼ ਦੇ ਕੁਝ ਪੁਰਜ਼ੇ / Kaaghaz de Kujh Purzei
ਜਦ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਗੁਆਚਦੇ ਨੇ, ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਲੱਭ ਜਾਨੀ ਆਂ; ਜਦ ਮੈਂ ਗੁਆਚ ਜਾਵਾਂ, ਤੇ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਉਗਮਦੇ ਨੇ,,, Jad Lafz guachdey ney, tey main labh jaani aan, jad main gum jaavan tey lafz ugamdey ney…
ਕਾਗ਼ਜ਼ ਦੇ ਕੁਝ ਪੁਰਜ਼ੇ / Kaaghaz de Kujh Purzei 
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ਜੂਨ 4, 2008 at 10:01 ਬਾਃ ਦੁਃ
Gurinderjit Singh
Hi Manpreet,
Your composition is really painting an emotional instance very beatifully. I like the granularity of your expressions. Couldn’t understand the last line.
Keep up gathering your previous notes in publish for us.
Cheers,
Gurinder
ਜੂਨ 5, 2008 at 5:28 ਪੂਃ ਦੁਃ
Manpreet
thank you, I must say that I was a bit nervous when I first put it up here. But your comment gives me hausla.
the last line is ” bakian nu pichah horh chaddeya” (baki=rest) (horh = push back)
ਜਨਵਰੀ 9, 2009 at 10:19 ਬਾਃ ਦੁਃ
YADWINDER KARFEW
bai ji,
assi ve punjabi lai thoda bahuta yogdan paoun de koshis ketee hai. plz je ghulamkalam.blogspot.com nu padon te link kar deo tan badi miharbani hovege.
yadwinder karfew .
ਅਗਸਤ 31, 2009 at 5:13 ਪੂਃ ਦੁਃ
Pardeep
really its ultimate .
i want to send few poems bt dnt kw how to write in gurmukhi script.