ਕਾਗ਼ਜ਼ ਦੇ ਕੁਝ ਪੁਰਜ਼ੇ / Kaaghaz de Kujh Purzei
ਜਦ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਗੁਆਚਦੇ ਨੇ, ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਲੱਭ ਜਾਨੀ ਆਂ; ਜਦ ਮੈਂ ਗੁਆਚ ਜਾਵਾਂ, ਤੇ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਉਗਮਦੇ ਨੇ,,, Jad Lafz guachdey ney, tey main labh jaani aan, jad main gum jaavan tey lafz ugamdey ney...
ਜਦ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਗੁਆਚਦੇ ਨੇ, ਤੇ ਮੈਂ ਲੱਭ ਜਾਨੀ ਆਂ; ਜਦ ਮੈਂ ਗੁਆਚ ਜਾਵਾਂ, ਤੇ ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ ਉਗਮਦੇ ਨੇ,,, Jad Lafz guachdey ney, tey main labh jaani aan, jad main gum jaavan tey lafz ugamdey ney...
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June 10, 2008 at 10:09 am
sekhon
Good … givce a pause after three lines…..it is complete….
patan nahin Kyon lok Wadiyan Kavitanvan lekhde ne….. good one! need a little bit balance of words
June 11, 2008 at 1:00 am
Gurinderjit Singh
Sekhon: Lagda, Manpreet is not pausing at all. She has kept these thouhts closer to herself for decades, and now exploding with beauties of poetic concoctions (don’t know if I am using the right word!!, angrezi di madam ji — galti muaaaf).
And making us guess (ਖ਼ਬਰੇ ਕੀਹਦੀ ???) ..
June 11, 2008 at 2:36 am
Manpreet
Concoctions-hahaha, it seems like ਮੈਂ ਇਹ concoctions ਮਾੜੇ ਹਕੀਮ ਵਾਂਗੂੰ ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਹਲਕ ਤੋਂ ਉਤਾਰ ਰਹੀ ਆਂ ।
Just Kidding. Thanks for both your suggestions. I value them greatly.
June 11, 2008 at 3:28 am
Gurinderjit Singh
So you write poetry at Amrit vele (2:36 am)!!
Your secret is out..
I will try the same, unjh te 8 vjj hi jande ne
June 12, 2008 at 1:41 pm
kiran grewal
hello dear.i really love your poetry.its really touching and compel me to think about it………..
keep it up.
August 12, 2008 at 1:14 pm
Dhindsa
Keep it up!
Dhindsa